Love the backgrounds!!
I like this world you're revealing. I'm a Larry Niven fan, so I'm definitely getting awesome Science Fiction vibes here.
Thanks. In my original draft of this story I started out with Tanya explaining everything about the world and the situation she was in. Then I decided that it might be more fun for the reader to try and figure out just what was going on, though some people might get frustrated because the story unfolds pretty slow.
You do narrative very well! It feels like a real person telling the story of her life. Character development in a story in any media is something that I love. It makes or breaks a story so both thumbs up to you (I'm including my two big toes too to say how much I like this)!
I like how you introduce the language, but have it translated the rest of the time. It's nice to see what it looks like, without all the work of reading the language, then reading the translation. Nice forethought!
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