Sorry about my cramming in so much text on these last few pages. I plan to start doing fewer panels per page.
She promises, but not the blonde hair girl who loves the natives, right?
Could you please, please correct the spelling of one word in this strip? The word is "strictly", as in, "in a strict way" or "in a strict manner". The whole dialogue seems much sillier if it has to appear as "strickly". Was humor what you wanted for this page?
Thanks for letting me know- I'm going to fix the spelling error right now. I guess that's why they have editors.
Thank you kindly. I find it helpful when I can focus, instead, on the more interesting aspects of the story and the characters.
Very interesting story here; plausible cultures too. The very parallel biology (including very humanoid natives) gave me a bit of a pause, but that's fairly trivial. Consider me hooked.
Not too crowded with script - it was necessary, so it _had_ to go in there ! B-)
...and I'm glad someone else mentioned the spelling error. I try not to be too pedantic about it...I just bite my nails B-)
One thing that recently came to mind, as regarding burning meteorites, is an area in the Middle East called Ur of the Chaldees. This is because I've heard one translation of the name being rendered as "place of burning demons", and that...thing in the sky surely did seem pretty lit. Bad news, though, for me to discover that the site many believe to be the original Ur of the Chaldees to be in an area currently being occupied by ISIL. For a lot of people, that would make plans to visit the Ziggurat, well, absurd to say the least. However, as you know, it might have been interesting otherwise. (...Eww.)
I have no problem with the text since it helps with the story.
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