Tangled River Page 271

posted 27th May 2020, 12:00 AM

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27th May 2020, 10:16 AM

Bathymetheus

Herman Melville could have used some sensitivity to his readers' limitations.

That said, I would not be averse to more adventures. But I hope you have more and better things in your future.

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28th May 2020, 7:36 AM

Delta-v

In real life, a return trip is almost always a bit anticlimactic and seems to go faster--I guess this is no different.

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29th May 2020, 9:14 AM

Guesticus

Don't want this story to end :(

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31st May 2020, 12:58 AM

Werwolfe

Funny, a while ago I actually used Tangled River as a positive example in a blog post about adventure stories, games and interconnected world-building, precisely because it didn't skimp on the old-timey travelogue side of things. I fail to see why some teenage brats' spat should usurp the sense of wonder at traversing wild and untamed landscapes.

Though I will concede it's in-character for how you've written Tanya so far.

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